Great! I liked the consistent pie motif. This video was direct, entertaining, and had a good flow. Nice work, guys!
The only thing I might consider changing is to not have the guy say "Nope" at around 51 seconds. It puts a slight slimmer negativity into a very positive ad, so that once instance of negativity does linger a bit, albeit very subtly. It might be better to have him say "Just getting started" or something like that.
Sunday, March 21, 2010 at 10:56AM
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Great! I liked the consistent pie motif. This video was direct, entertaining, and had a good flow. Nice work, guys!
The only thing I might consider changing is to not have the guy say "Nope" at around 51 seconds. It puts a slight slimmer negativity into a very positive ad, so that once instance of negativity does linger a bit, albeit very subtly. It might be better to have him say "Just getting started" or something like that.
Nice! It seems like having a few different numbers would get confusing though...